Thursday, September 30, 2010

Cactus: Not much better than no cactus.

"Getting Out" by Cleopatra Mathis

Probably the best part of this poem is the fact that the poet's name is freakin' CLEOPATRA!

The tone of this piece is surprising for a poem about divorce. It does not blame one person for the divorce (uses the pronoun "we" for the majority of subjects of sentences), nor does it take a frustrated or bitter tone. Rather, the couple is almost remorseful they have to be divorced ("Yet I think of the lawyer's bewilderment/when we cried, the last day."). In addition, it takes a nostalgic tone in the second stanza with such notables phrases as "Days were different:" and "'you gonna miss me/when I'm gone.'" The second stanza also reveals one of them tried to leave but just couldn't bring themselves to be away very long. Yet, what's interesting is that the poem's title and other phrases in it ("waking like inmates who beat the walls") suggests they are trapped in their love. Oh what horror.
Oh yes folks, this is Cleopatra Mathis. I want her hair, girlfran.

...then when I pulled into my parking spot at Kroger and got out, I heard all these bullets whizzing by! And they were all like PEW! PEW PEW PEW! Then they started shelling and everything was all BLOWING UP! So I ducked and rolled under the Prius next to me, soldier-crawled into the store and bought some juice and crackers.

"The Apparition" by John Donne

And I was so hoping to get that E.D. poem on the page before! But it's okay, Costello, you made up for it with this John Donne selection. Speaking of this selection, John Donne was doing some hardcore hypothetical creepin'. Baaaasically, if his current lady nags him too much, he'll "die" (literal or metaphorical? who knows, it's poetry!) and then when she thinks she's finally rid of him with her new hypothetical man, the speaker will hypothetically haunt her while she and her new hypothetical man sleep in their hypothetical bed. Not only was the speaker hypothetically creepin' on the woman, but the poem was ("hypothetically?") creepin' on the reader with it's eerie tone. Such imagery as "thy sick taper will begin to wink," and "then shall my ghost come to thy bed" gives a very haunted house theme to it all. The speaker feels he will be quite effective in his hypothetical creepin' mission that he will leave the woman "Bathed in a cold quicksilver sweat" and "[lying] a verier ghost than I." Ooh, gotcha there Ms. Naggypants!

Ooh look! It must be their hypothetical pet!

OK, so what's the speed of dark?

"Crossing the Bar" by Alfred, Lord Tennyson

If tone gave an award for having tone, this poem would win it. Yeah, I just wrote that sentence, deal with it. Firstly offs, the first obstacle over which to hurdle is the metaphor for a boat coming to shore, a sandbar, and crossing water representing the crossing of life to death. However, usually, especially (whoah there conditionals) in America, death is viewed as something of a drag. Many poets have attempted to contemplate the mystery of death and whether to fear it or not, but the speaker, by his tone, seems almost relieved, anticipatory, and hopeful to die. Such phrases as "turns again home," "and may there be no sadness of farewell," and "hope to see my Pilot face to face" provide a hopeful, glad tone. In addition, the speaker utilizes imagery of crossing water which is plentiful in biblical imagery as well. It's quite holy.

Portions of Servitude are Quite Relaxing on Wednesdays

"My mistress' eyes" by William Shakespeare

Golly gee, y'all, Shakespeare's done it again! In his sonnet to his mistress, Shakespeare refuses to sugarcoat the compliments often given by other men to their women that exaggerate to the extreme. It is interesting to note that, his mistress is probably not his wife at the time, but an actual mistress. When Shakespeare died, he left his second-best bed to his wife and nothing else. This begs the question, would Shakespeare tell his wife that her eyes do blaze like the sun or have lips as red as coral? Maybe not knowing, she would accept these praises and Shakespeare, having got his sick pleasure from these secret underhanded compliments would only laugh to himself with a "if only she knew" kind of expression on his face. Yeah, kind of like one you're making. I must say you have wonderful facial motor skills.
You and Margaret Atwood, buddy.

Thursday, September 23, 2010

Bring me a French Baguette

"Ozymandias" by Percy Shelley

This poem, in a unit involving irony, was ever so ironic. Ozymandias, once upon a time, was a ruler of Egypt or some sandy place like that. Being a natural-born douche bag, he abused his power and made pretty things to show himself off. Mr. Hotstuff is then come across years later in statue form by a "traveler" who said even his statue was smug. It commented on how Ozymandias did such big, big, big things and that we should all cower at his kingdom and his sneering visage. The funny ha-ha part, though is that he's a broken statue in the middle of nowhere with nothing but sand around him! Maybe you had to be there. Either way, I thought the poem was interesting in that it satirized a dead historical figure. But Ozymandias is supposed to represent a current political figya of that time, but just who it is will remain a mystery because I have not the brain-power or background information to unravel this pertinent mystery.
Meh.

Chalupa! Which means "I'm Hungry" in Hispaniola.

"Next to of course god america i" by E. E. Cummings

Oh well hey, look at this, they ain't no punctshahation up in hurr. The lack of most punctuation helps to further jumble up many phrases of patriotism. These come from traditional United States songs and a now cliche ideology of "freedom isn't free and I'm proud of it because people died." Even the poem form has gone awry in that Cummings smashed up both an English and Italian sonnet in his work. What a sly dog...Woof! Then ending with a narration of the quoted speaker's actions, reveals this "speech" was delivered on the very morals it tried to denounce after "He spoke. And drank rapidly a glass of water." The nonsensical speech attempting to whip people up into a patriotic frenzy while being delivered by someone unconfident and insecure which is illustrated by his rapid water drinking directly after his speech.
God Bless Uhmurica!

I would be in a band called the Backstreet Hags.

"Much Madness is Divinest Sense" by E.D.

As a wunderbar segue to more societal issues we delve into the paradoxical and satirical poem of the ever lovely E.D. In this one, E.D. gives us a little seeming contradiction with which to enrich ourselves by equating "madness" to "sense." And then stating if one has "sense" then one really has "madness." Yet to be mad, in the speaker's eyes, is to disagree with the majority, to demur. Society will then tell you thatcha craazzzzy if you would ever consider to disagree with them and that the only sensible thing to do is blindly assent. Yet when one does not think for themselves or at all, then one has no brain function and is madder than a hatter. Yet to use one's brain is madness by society's standards, yet logically, to think is to have "divinest sense." YOU WERE WRONG ABOUT THE BARBIES, SOCIETY!! WWWRRROOONNNGGG!!

Lightning Blew Up my Modem. How does that feel? Squishy?

"Barbie Doll" by Marge Piercy

When I was little, I was definitely jealous of girls who got to play with dolls in their AWESOME doll houses with their AWESOME accessories (a hot pink Corvette screams classy) that provided hours of endless fun. But boys were supposed to go outside and get dirty and push each other around and throw dirt in each other's eyes. These are just two "societal norms" placed on children today. Well, guess what society, I hate outside and I happen to appreciate the finer details of a fine pink, plastic Corvette. If only the girl in "Barbie Doll" could have taken a few lessons from this rogue, then she wouldn't be in her final resting place covered in wrappings of irony. The girl is described as intelligent, healthy, and overall AWESOME; however, someone notes her imperfect nose and legs. From this she feels she must alter herself into a cookie-cutter shape society projects for all people to follow, much like the Barbie dolls I was denied the right to play wit....I mean, that she played with in her youth. When she changes her outside to become pretty for society, she loses that which makes her AWESOME and degrades into a death of her physical/mental/emotional self.
I wasn't alone!!

Thursday, September 16, 2010

Giddy is hardly an accurate description.

This unit on figurative language is a little more difficult than the previous one about imagery (which is why I'm only analyzing four poems this time, did you catch that?). Imagery is at least something concrete, tangible, visible. Something figurative is the very antithesis, especially in the language of poetry where the lines are blurred even more. Much like Nabokov's analogy, imagery paints a kind of picture which can be viewed in one sitting with our eye (or in the picture we paint in our mind). Figurative language creates a work unable to be experienced immediately with a single organ, but instead mulls around in our brain until we make sense of it. The authors' suggestions never become something immediately clear with defined lines and boundaries and fancy borders. Something that takes more effort to analyze and "view" will always be more difficult. I blame it on Î”G.
It's all his fault.

Fascist. Hag.

"Bright Star" by John Keats

Stars may be magical and mystical and romantic and stuff, but there are probably better things to put admiration and loathing into. The speaker almost loses himself in describing the positive attributes of the star, patient and steadfast, yet then comes to his senses ("No-yet still steadfast, still unchangeable....") and accuses it of being alone, sleepless, and overall static. Then, to create some interest in this thing, he shifts to include his lover in the picture and how being static would be worst of all, preferring to end at the highest peak of his passion than to level off. This theme is probably also used in the movie Bright Star about the Keat-inator himself and his many conquests which is evident in the tagline of the movie, "First love burns brightest." Aren't they adorable over there? It's definitely a chick flick, but I might see it. What do you say Ebert and Roeper? Thumbs up or down? "Bright Star" also seems to me like it would make one of those trashy romance novels women read.

Garth, that was a haiku!

"I taste a liquor never brewed" by E.D.

Oh how figurative you are Miss E.D.! Not to mention all the extended metaphor a-hap'nin' with the liquor and the air and the nature. Naturally, this little number is an entire metaphor for comparing happy nature things to liquor. Nature being the choice drink of E.D. for a good ol' time makes her "inebriated" and giddy such as a-a-a-a-a-al-ca-haul may make someone else less than rational. She's also really in the drinking mood because "When 'Landlords' turn the drunken Bee out of the Foxglove's door-" (as in throwing a drunk out of a bar) and "When Butterflies - renounce their 'drams'-" (the Butterflies put a cap on they dranks) E.D. states "I shall but drink the more!" (Woo! Shawty is ON ta-night!) However, because she's getting "drunk on nature," this seems to imply that she loves nature so much she won't be tired of it even when part of nature (butterflies and bees) are tired of it. Also, just as a fun fact, E.D. alludes to the Rhine river in Germany where they grow grapes on the riverside with which to make wine.
Party on Wayne. Party on Garth.
Excellent!
Little. Yellow. Different.

Wayne, you learned to say "I look pretty" in Cantonese!

Who told you? Was it Steve? That Steve.

"Dream Deferred" by Langston Hughes

Much of the poems effectiveness comes from the use of comparisons made mostly by similes. Each simile represents a possible effect of a dream being put off. The first asks if a dream dries up "like a raisin in the sun." The dream may become shriveled and brown and uninteresting like a dry raisin, baking in the sun's heat. The second asks if it festers "like a sore" and then that sore runs. The dream may eventually turn into something harmful to oneself as an infected sore harms the body. The dream may then "stink like rotten meat." The dream you held so dear becomes something repulsive enough to cause you to gag. It may also "crust and sugar over" forming a sweet barrier around the issue your dream pursues. In the final simile, the dream may "[sag] like a heavy load." weighing you down, causing you no longer to have the strength to chase it.

What packs the punch though, is that after all the similes, "AP" Langston Hughes attacks the subject with a succinct metaphor asking if the dream explodes. An explosion is never good and carries with it connotations of violence and destruction. When put in the context of the time and author, it could refer to Langston Hughes believing civil rights will only come after violence takes its course.

The Big C Seemed Way Too Excited When Discussing This One...

"February" by Madge Atwood

The title (of the blog post) says it all. The gleam in Costello's eyes when discussing this...piece...was like two bright lighthouses shining in the night. I suppose it can be justified because the more we discussed the piece, the more I enjoyed it. In fact, it was one of my favorites for this unit because of its tone and familiar imagery. The coziness of staying in bed in a warm house during the cold, hard days of February provides an almost picturesque winter scene with the poet, scrawling in a journal about this time, then contemplating her cat that joins her up on the bed to "[tell] whether or not [she's] dead." Oh, that cat. With a more than vivid illustration, the speaker portrays the cat in a negative light during "February, month of despair...." and then compares humanity, making them no higher than animals, to the cat. ("It's all about sex and territory, which are what will finish us off in the long run.") Finally, after her tone of bitterness concerning love, sex, and procreation, she calls the cat (and people) to action so as not to be glum during the gray February days and make it something worthwhile.
Obviously the cat was a lolcat.

Thursday, September 9, 2010

Do all the women in the Bureau have to wear those really masculine shoes?

"London" by William Blake

I dunno 'bout you, but I was definitely getting a whole tone and mood are really important kind of vibe from this poem. Oh, you did too? Well, I equated William Blake's description of London with Sweeny Todd. Both give a very dark tone and mood, Sweeny Todd with both the story and the physical lighting and "London" with imagery of "black'ning Church[es], blood down Palace walls, marks of weakness...[and] woe." In addition, much like E.D.'s funeral poem, which is also on the darker side, sound was very prevalent. Many of the characters "cry" such as every man, every infant, and Chimney sweepers, in addition to others making their voices heard as well. This is also found in Sweeny Todd through singing. London's a rough place, it seems.


How could I not post a Sweeny Todd song? I feel it compliments the poem perfectly.

Ling-Ling! You walked right by Crazy Nails and No Say Hi Me!

"The Convergence of the Twain" by Thomas Hardy

This poem, through the vessel of The Titanic, attempts to portray the destruction of human vanity. In the first few stanzas, the ship is described as an opulent entity with "Jewels in joy designed/To ravish the sensuous mind." Yet now the boat, this embodiment of human achievement which was "unsinkable" not sits at the bottom of the ocean with "grotesque, slimed, dumb, indifferent" sea-worms and "Dim moon-eyed fishes" which have no capacity for appreciating its beauty. In the final stanzas, the juxtaposition of the iceberg and the ship come into play. The iceberg and the ship "grow" over time together, at the same pace, each being the other's enemy. Then a greater being, ("Immanent Will, Spinner of the Years") wishing to stick it to humanity's "vaingloriousness" (which is the best word in the poem) "Said 'Now!'" and the two collided. Obviously the iceberg won.
Hmm, who would win in a fight, a boat or an iceberg? I'm just wracked with indecision.

I'm just tryin' to meet you half way!

"I Felt a Funeral, in my Brain" by E.D.

From the details, we can correctly conclude the speaker is in a coffin at his own funeral due to the abundance of senses provided, especially sound. Many times sound was conveyed through imagery like "A Service, like a Drum-/Kept beating - beating -", "And then I heard them life a Box....", "As all the Heavens were a Bell,/And Being, but an Ear/And I, and Silence, some strange Race...." What one may expect to be in a poem full of imagery though, is blatantly missing. Sight is such a strong sense that it is often taken for granted and dulls our other senses due to our heavy reliance on it. Because of its absence, one may assume the speaker is in his own coffin at his own "funeral." Naturally the funeral is not literal because the speaker still has abundant senses
(much unlike a corpse), so it is also appropriate to interpret a figurative meaning for the funeral. I tend to agree with the "insanity" interpretation due to the almost exasperated and excluding tone. An interpretation about a struggle with drugs may seem appropriate in a modern application; however, because both insanity and drugs have an outstanding effect mentally, they can be easily interchanged. Both interpretations, I feel, fall into our beloved "cone zone"; yet, I do not feel the "loss of religion/faith" interpretation is quite as conical. A person chooses to have faith and believe in God. One would not write about one's own absence of religion in such a negative light of it being the cause of their spiritual death, because if they do not believe in God, they don't have to worry about a spiritual death in the first place.
Natural and delicious. Who knew?

Ling-Ling, you forgot your Bling-Bling.

"The Widow's Lament in Springtime" by William Carlos Williams

First, having a name like William Williams is either a sign of uniqueness, cruelty, or a mixture of both in his parents. A major theme of the poem is definitely the poignancy of springtime for the widow. As shown in the previous poem, "Spring," this season is usually a sign of happiness and rebirth, this can even be seen in the musical The Producers in the song "Springtime for Hitler" which recounts in Broadway fashion the joy of Hitler conquering Europe (If unfamiliar with this musical, I suggest introducing yourself.). So with the universality of equating spring and happiness, the poignancy comes when the widow no longer sees the beauty in it due to her great pain of losing her husband. She recounts many times the "masses of flowers" around her yet feeling nothing. Even the "new grass flame[d]" in previous years but now she is consumed by an oxymoronic "cold fire" of longing for her husband. Feeling all this super-duper sadness, though, she does want to leave her yard of sorrow ("Sorrow is my own yard....") to the meadow her son suggests. The son seems to be wanting her to move on ("Go look at those flowers for a while!"), yet the widow wants to "sink into the marsh near them" as a kind of way of dying to be with her long lost hubby.
How could you not like this? It's beautiful!

Sort of Crinkly.


"Spring" by Gerard Manley Hopkins puts me in a very "I want to plant a garden" mood. The first part is especially descriptive due to its sonnet form because it is indeed an Italian sonnet. This involves a beginning form of eight lines called the octave, which in this poem is a vastly descriptive image of spring. This includes images of "weeds...shoot[ing] long, lovely, and lush." (which puts me in the green mood...I should buy a Prius.) in addition to a "Thrush's eggs" and "racing lambs" which all seem to symbolize new life. Unlike the first Dickinson poem we read which was incorrectly interpreted as a garden scene, but is rather a sunset, the details aforementioned make "Spring" much like a garden, specifically the Garden of Eden, which is alluded to later in the poem. In fact, this later comes after a very important element of an Italian sonnet called the volta or "turn." By utilizing a different rhyme scheme, the volta signifies a change in the subject or an extrapolation on the beginning section. The generic garden image is expounded upon to carry the more important connotation of the Garden of Eden which allows for a smooth transition to the final stanza concerning Jesus and the thangs he do by saving innocence and shtuff.

Monday, September 6, 2010

I would have posted this earlier, but I decided AP Chem was a wee bit more important.

If it may please his highness, I would like to state that I've really enjoyed these past few essays we've read about what makes a good reader and now, the limits of interpreting poetry. They've both been provocative (provocative in the scholarly way and... ahem, fondling the details, anyone?) and mentally stimulating in that they've both suggested radically new ways of viewing literature. "The Nature of Proof in Interpretation of Poetry" by Laurence Perrine has had the most effect on me because, though not nearly as radical as the Nabokov piece, I felt the message of limiting poetry to finite interpretations was incredibly well founded. What first struck me was Perrine's reasoning of how a poet will (almost) never limit their poetry. It's much too like an insult to themselves that they must explain what they meant by what they wrote and could be a kind of insult to the reader of the poem because they did not have the insight to correctly interpret the feelings of the author. Perrine said it better than I did just now with my watered-down analysis, but in this respect, I'm illustrating exactly what he's trying to convey. A poem, or a few lines of prose, has the most punch-in-the-gut effect when left to mean what it was meant to mean by itself. Next, he gives us the two criteria for correctly interpreting poetry.

1) "A correct interpretation, if the poem is a successful one, must be able to account satisfactorily for any detail of the poem. If it is contradicted by any detail it is wrong. If several interpretations, the best is that which must fully explain the details of the poem without itself being contradicted by any detail."

2) "If more that one interpretation satisfactorily accounts for all the details of the poem, the best is that which is most economical, i.e. which relies on the fewest assumptions not grounded in the poem itself."

To help illustrate these criteria in action, Perrine puts them to use on an untitled Emily Dickinson poem. Probably the biggest shock for me in this piece was how he rips apart the "garden" interpretation of the poem. From the amalgamation of interpretations he posed to his students, one could interchange my interpretation and the students' interpretations with little to no discrepancy. Let me tell you, I felt like some pretty hot stuff with my "garden" interpretation, but Perrine uses each criterion to successfully prove the "sunset" reading of this poem. He could have stopped there because I was thoroughly convinced of his point, but he presses on, tackling the anomalies that are symbols. The poem he used as an example, in contrast to the Dickinson poem which was either about a garden or a sunset, was definitely about a rose and a worm. However, the language suggests that the rose and worm are something more. This grey area of what they could stand for is where some go awry. Just like the Dickinson poem which had definite a definite scene of a sunset, so too do the rose and worm have definite parameters of what they could stand for. From the details we get the rose is something inherently good, and the worm is some form of corruption. The limits come in that the rose could never be something other than good such as an innocent beauty, the ideal mankind, etc. The worm could never be anything but some corrupting agent. He makes his final comparison in his last statement, "A rose is a rose is a rose, and is more than a rose. But a rose is not an ink blot. Nor is a poem." Which I liken to a wonderful saying from my days in geometry, "All squares are rhombi; however, not all rhombi are squares."

Something to ponder and correctly interpret:

High-schoolers: If you are described as a “square”, don’t be too concerned. If you are called a “rhombus” start to worry. This more complex polygon, plus the additional syllable, suggests you have also alienated your more intelligent peers.


ParalleloWHAM!

I think I've taken this rhombus thing a bit too far...